Sunday, May 13, 2012

Poetry Month: Day 13 (by Cheyanne)

I chose "Bees.... Bees I Say!" because i dont think the class is really mature and i just wanna make a poem for the class so they understand what they act like.

Bees... Bees I Say!
People panicking talking
about ooh I'm allergic,
get it out of here! as the kids say
Katie gets tempted "4-324 you
need to stop acting like a bunch
of 1st grader's... you guys are in 4th
grade act like it" I was not even panicking
even when the bee came above my head
what i did was you know.....................
Act calm

2 comments:

  1. When I read your poem, I imagine the people panicking and talking sound just like the buzzing bees.

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  2. I agree with you Cheyanne and I think your poem told a good story.

    -Arya

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