I chose one of my poems because I'm wanting to see how my poems do. I also want to share my thoughts. I chose
the Last Time.
by Gerrit
There over there look my cat she's so sick
SO sick we must put her to sleep
she's skinny,soft,super sick
Can I help her?
But quick look the cage if I turn one more page she'll be gone so I will not do it
But life will continue slowly forever for everyone
here is where I feel week
can I save her can I? ''Does she have to go'' I say''Yes '' is all I hear
This is the time the cage is waiting,wrestling,to keep the cat in.Her paw comes through a hole
I grabbed it like life wishing I would never have to let go.''BAM LOCK''
the door is shut parting us forever.
And forever is never!
Your poem expresses powerful feelings. I think memories help us reach out and grab the "paws" of our loved ones. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Gerrit.
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