Friday, May 25, 2012

Poetry Month: Day 25 (by Edison)

I chose "Hail" because it has a way of showing how I feel.Also, it tells what really did happen the night it was hailing.
Enjoy!

Hail
"Clank!"
"Clank!"
"Clank!"
Hail hits my roof over and over again.
"Bonk!"
"Bonk!"
"Bonk!"
I wake up, startled
Nothing but darkness
"Boom!"
"Boom!"
"BOOM!"
Ice covers the hail and makes it bigger.
"Ka-Boom!"
"Ka-Boom!"
KA-BOOM
Hail can be a very cool form of precipitation
-by Edison

1 comment:

  1. Did Jake ever tell you about the time we encountered hail while climbing Mt. Hale?
    You make great use of onomatopoeia!

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